Mr Poźnan

 


Village Leader Ian called in to see Mr Poźnan a week before the flower show. He sold him raffle tickets and asked if he’d enter something from his garden. Mr Poźnan entered his rhubarb even though he’s been unwell for a long time now. 

I saw Mr Poźnan on the morning of The Show.
His eyes are always twinkling and are a watery blue like Auntie Glad’s, 
And he always has a gentle smile on his face, even when his hip pained him, as he walks
His rhubarb, as it turned out, was a winning class, which tickled him and his wife

Before judging, he gently held my elbow and guided me to a quiet corner of the hall.
He was serious and straight to the point
And how I didn’t cry then and there , God only knows
I hear your job is under threat ? he whispered with only a hint of accent “ do you need any money?”
I looked at him silently and his blue eyes nodded “ Just say and it’s yours” he added kindly 

I could only smile awkwardly, my lips tight and sensing my emotion , 
He squeezed my elbow and whispered again
Your trousers are inside out by the way “ 
And he was right, my trendy linen pants from Madrid were indeed inside out 

32 comments:

  1. I was about to get teary eyed, too, but your trousers were inside out!

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  2. You make us cry then make us laugh. Inside out!? At the whole day long flower show? Oh John. [but no one cared bec it was just so ''you'']. What a kind man Mr P is---I was reading, afraid he'd passed away, perhaps clutching his blue ribbon rhubarb.

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    1. No only in the morning set up lizzy , I nipped to the loo when the judges turned up

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  3. I wonder if he had doubts about which to mention first, the money or the trousers? xx

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  4. Anonymous9:04 pm

    Jesus H Christ !
    John ……more fucking tears and it’s not even vodka time here

    Lee

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    1. 🍸🍸🍸🍸🍸🍸🍸🍸🍸

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  5. Anonymous9:07 pm

    I generally don’t comment, but this is lovely and funny and yes— your book would bring joy and tears to many souls. That is if you choose to write one.

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    1. Anonymous9:09 pm

      I don’t comment either, but I’m sobbing like a silly mare over one old man’s kindness
      Teena

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    2. Oh teena get a grip xx 🩷

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  6. Anonymous9:08 pm

    Oh- my name is Stephanie from the U.S.

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  7. What a friend! Generosity then pointing out an issue! Not missing a beat. I love Mr poznan

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  8. Yorkshire Liz9:10 pm

    I also thought you were going to say he had died! What a lovely man, with a wonderful face, full of having lived a life. And such quiet kindness. A man to have at your back. BUT! This story and how you tell it just supports and proves what we all keep telling you - set to and write the book! We all need it, and so does the rest of the world. They just don't know it yet!

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    1. The photo isn’t him btw , but almost x

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  9. How sweet is that. In every way.

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  10. Anonymous9:18 pm

    Didn’t he offer to buy your house when the professor left

    Lee

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    1. He tried with the community council

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  11. John, you live amongst some lovely people. Wish everywhere was like that.
    Sending a hug, but I could do with one too.
    Jean.

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  12. Anonymous9:41 pm

    He's a star, use the money wisely :) No trips to see the lisping choir lol :)

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  13. Damselfly9:42 pm

    What a dear sweet fella he is! Thank you for sharing this story... and yes, it's one more for your book! 🥰

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  14. Generous in his friendship and in his "word to the wise" about your trousers, LOL!

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  15. OMG what a post. I don't know whether to laugh or cry.

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  16. Trousers inside out? I hope you weren't wearing your underpants on the outside.

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  17. Beyond kind and such a lovely gesture (including the trousers). I'm puddled up but attempting to get a grip. I'm sure you're tired of hearing us all nag, but you really do have a wonderful book in your future John, should you so choose. X

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