John lived quietly in his stone cottage on the rolling hills of Wales. His days were simple—tending his garden, walking the forest paths, and watching the evening mist rise from the valleys. Yet within his heart burned a secret dream: to one day meet King Felipe of Spain, the man he admired not only for his dignity but for the kindness that seemed to shine through his every gesture. For John, the thought of even the briefest touch, a kiss upon the lips, was like imagining heaven itself.
One late afternoon, as the sky blushed with the colors of dusk, John heard a knock at his door. Surprised—since few ever came this far—he opened it to find a tall, distinguished man in a simple coat, his dark hair slightly tousled by the wind.
“I’m terribly sorry to trouble you,” the stranger said in a gentle Spanish accent. “My car has broken down on the road nearby. Might I ask for some help?”
John blinked, his breath catching in his chest. He knew that face—though here it was without crown, without ceremony. It was him. King Felipe, standing on his doorstep as though fate itself had led him there.
Trying to steady his voice, John invited him in. “Of course. Please, come inside, Your—” He stopped himself. The king smiled knowingly.
“Tonight, I am only Felipe,” he said warmly.
They sat by the fire as John made tea, the glow of the flames flickering between them. Conversation flowed easily—Felipe speaking of his travels, John of the quiet beauty of the Welsh countryside. There was laughter, gentle silences, and the unmistakable sense of two souls finding one another in the unlikeliest of places.
When the hour grew late, Felipe rose to leave, but paused by the door. He looked at John, his gaze soft, searching. “You have given me more than shelter tonight,” he said quietly. “You’ve given me peace.”
And before John could find words, Felipe leaned closer. The kiss was tender, unhurried, a promise sealed in warmth and wonder. For John, it was as though the world stopped, leaving only that perfect, impossible moment.
Weird eh
AI is indeed weird.
ReplyDeleteThe sentence structure is a little awkward and the prose stilted. AI needs a person to proofread it, so it's not really worth the time? IKD
XOXO
AI steals original art and writing to reuse without attribution. Not recommended here. But for simple searches it's useful.
ReplyDeleteAh, sweet little Felipe. I remember watching TV footage of him as a young teen with his family when we lived in Tenerife in the 80s.
ReplyDeleteWeird indeed ... but I can see the great big grin on your face from here. :-)
ReplyDeleteNot as well written as you would have done, but I was with you all the way. I think I can guess what your dreams will be like over the next few nights - enjoy! xx
ReplyDeleteHorrifying. I work for a medical publisher; they are slowly phasing out the editors/writers (that would be me) and replacing us with a proprietary AI program. It is the way of the future, yes, but I don't have to like it. (Although I am a fan of the beautiful King Felipe.)
ReplyDeleteI worry about the consequences of AI, but I did enjoy this story -- but not as much you, I’ll bet!
ReplyDeleteThe premise is cute tho I find the writing stodgy and overly embellished. It does create a sweet scene, a day dream. Needs a good human rewrite/ editor. I think it could be a great basis for the panto show tho, good idea.
ReplyDeletePerhaps there's a market for personalised Mills & Boon?
ReplyDeleteIf anything John, it’s given you some additional fantasy thoughts! 🤣 L
ReplyDeleteYou write far better than this.
ReplyDeleteOh, wow! It could happen ... but perhaps there's no cause to hold your breath!
ReplyDeleteI must agree you're the better writer by far!
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ReplyDeleteA poet, Penelope Notes ,asked Artificial Intelligence how it compared itself to humans. This was an instant response. Impressive methinks and scary ! Poets have noticed lately an increase of numbers visiting their sites. It is suspected that it is AI bots ( I have no idea what that is) gleaning their poems.
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ReplyDeleteI was reading recently about AI use by students at uni to prepare coursework, and their lecturers in turn using AI tools to spot the original work amongst the AI generated rubbish. Set a thief to catch a thief?
I wonder why King Felipe was driving around North Wales. Perhaps he was also searching for The Fairy Glen near Betws-y-Coed.
ReplyDeleteHere is the problem with all the AI in the world. It uses so much electricity and water that it is taking away from people and animals. I read some article that a family with a disabled son was suffering because Meta built a huge data center by their house and it was taking their water supply. They cannot sell because their house is worth nothing and Meta takes no responsibility. I think for that reason and other articles I have read will keep me away from it.
ReplyDeleteIt's a nice enough little story, but for me the soul is missing. There are no 'feels' that your writing gives us.
ReplyDeleteThe story paints a nice picture.
ReplyDeleteI hear lots of text will be generated by AI and then require some tweaking. Uni students are using AI broadly.
Love it ! So Mills and Boon’ The Prince and Villager’ starring Johnny G and Felipe B. Music by the Lisping Choir .
ReplyDeleteOh my GAWD! That's it -- I'm FINISHED with my Captain America/Winter Soldier fanfiction obsession! From now on, I will read ONLY John Gray/King Felipe fanfics! This one is outstanding, although it would be tagged "T" for "Teen and Up Audiences" on the Archive of Our Own website since it just features a chaste but romantic kiss. The fics tagged "E" for "Explicit, only suitable for adult audiences" are undoubtedly queuing up on the site already IN DROVES.
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