Someone In The Room

 I’m sat with a patient,
In their room. It’s 12.55
The orientating clock says that clearly 
The patient knows I’m there

Medication has been given and the bed is comfortably made.
The patient is fighting sleep but desperately needs it .
Strange shapes hide behind the television and the wardrobe 
And I sit between them and the bed
The patient knows I am there

Silently I read the news on my tablet. 
I reply to an email and a message or two
And try to sound fatherly when I say
It’s time to sleep. 
The patient knows I am there. 

I watch a silent video about a blind horse
And a chubby gay New Yorker dances in the street
I read news on Gaza
And the reviews of a film I want to see
The patient approaches sleep but knows I am there

Someone is in the room.






21 comments:

  1. Anonymous1:44 am

    I am not the patient but I know the need. Thank you John.
    Sydney

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  2. Barbara Anne1:51 am

    ... and so the patient will sleep because you are there and he/she is not alone. Bless you both.

    Hugs!

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  3. To die alone would be awful, to die with someone by your side would be 'reassuring'. You write beautifully.

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  4. Lovely lines, composed by someone who KNOWS.

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  5. Gently touching, John. Not sure if you meant it as a poem or not, but it is one. In a case like this, what do you do after the patient falls asleep? Does someone stay all night?

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  6. Margo6:34 am

    Just read a little research on the sleep inducing benefits of the rather automatic soft stroking that mothers do on babies, it works on anyone and can be on any part of the body.

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  7. "Stay with me". And you do. I wish this for everyone.

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  8. Anonymous7:43 am

    You can read that as either a gentle, emotional, and comforting story about human love and caring - or as a horror story (with a gentle, emotional, and comforting nurse lovingly caring and protecting his patient while horror lurks in the shadows).
    Seen too many Halloween posts already.
    Ulvmor

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  9. Possibly the most important "job" of a nurse. xx

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  10. I would not want to be alone either. x

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  11. Anonymous9:01 am

    Would bate for someone to be there when I tried to sleep, even for the last time. Sorry I must be the exception. Pam

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  12. Jackie11:29 am

    As always beautifully expressed

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  13. Anonymous11:41 am

    Beautifully written John. I find great comfort in knowing someone is there,even now. Recently, I have come to hate the dark of the night and often need to keep a little lamp on.

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  14. Anonymous11:42 am

    Above is me, Carole R. Forgot to add my name.

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  15. That was beautiful, even though it did break me a little as I remembered my Dad. Maybe his hospital nurse had said that to him?

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  16. To misquote the Bard,

    To sleep,
    Perchance to dream,
    There is the rub,
    For in the sleep,
    What dreams may come,

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  17. Anonymous12:42 pm

    Understated but so meaningful x
    Alison in Devon x

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  18. And they are not alone. You are there.

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  19. Beautifully stated.
    We can all agree, nobody should be alone. I'm glad you are there.

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